I wrote this short story a few years ago to enter in a
competition that was being judged by Jack Whyte, who is a renowned author of
Arthurian fiction. Since I admired his stories and relished
bringing myths to
life myself, I thought my work might have an edge in the
competition. I did not win any awards, but the story turned out to be a prequel
to my third novel, “Swords of Artaius.”
It is a story set in Europe, circa 200 BCE, before the Roman
conquest, when Europe was ruled by a myriad of Celtic and Germanic tribes. The
protagonist started in the first novel, “Fires of Belenus,” as a young, naïve clansman charged with saving his love from the sacrificial fires of Belenus. In the
second novel, “Cult of Camulos,” he evolves into Artaius the Bear, the most
revered warrior in Celtica. But this esteemed rank comes at a high price. When he is angered, he lapses into an uncontrollable rage, much like the great Cu’ Chulainn in Irish folklore. This
story starts the adventure of the third and last book in the series, where he saves his tribe from invasion, is tamed by
love, and comes to grip with his anger.
The short story “Feast of Lughnasa” touches on two timely topics: excessive force and sexual abuse. The main characters, Lughin and Artaius, might evoke some discussion with regard to the evolving perception of sexual abuse and excessive force at work in our culture today.
The
Feast of Lughnasa
Artaius tapped his foot to the music
and watched the young men and women stepping high and twirling to the lively
jig played on pipes and harps. The percussion of skin drums reverberated
against his chest. He belched loudly and moved his hand to his stomach to sooth
the irritation of hunger.
Bruchar leaned over to his ear.
“Something to eat would ease our stomachs. How long must we wait for the ard-ri to appear? What hospitality is
this? It’s the middle of the night and no meal is served.”
“It is Lughnasa and rituals must be followed,”
Artaius, answered. “The feast cannot start until the ard-ri arrives and is
re-born to lead the tribe another year.”
The feasting hall was jammed with
the family and retinue bound to the ard-ri. Smoke from hearth fires
hung in the air adding tangy aromas of roasting pig and bubbling stew. Bruchar
inhaled hungrily, squirmed on the bench, and stood up.
“Where are you going?” asked
Artaius.
“To find something to eat”
“By the light of Lugh, you cannot.”
“Watch your tongue, unruly cur. I am
your chief.”
“Chief or not, you must be patient. We are
honored guests and sit in the place of highest honor; closer to the ard-ri than
his favored clients, even closer than his blood family. In honor of our
alliance, we must show respect and wait.”
Bruchar sat down and expelled a
breath. He slapped Artaius across the back and laid a monstrous paw across his
shoulder. “You are too young to be so wise.”
“Young?” Artaius smiled and shook his head.
“Have you noticed the gray in my mustache?”
Bruchar reached over and grabbed one
of the braids dangling below Artaius’ chin, held it up, and said, “Silver
tipped like an old bear. You still have a few good years. The most dangerous
bears are older, wise to the hunter’s tricks. Look at me.” Bruchar grabbed a
lock of his own hair. “My head has turned gray as ash; yet, I can run down a
pig faster than any whelp at this great feast.”
Artaius noted Bruchar’s wild mane,
flowing over his shaggy bearskin cloak. Pungent smells of musk and sweat
surrounded it. He smiled to himself at how ironic it was that he and not
Bruchar was the chosen one, Artaius the Bear, the Right-hand of Camulos. It was
Bruchar who had the countenance of a bear.
A young woman approached with a
pitcher of beer. Bruchar eagerly extended his cup. He pulled her close. She
smiled tactfully and tried to pull away.
“Let me go. I have many to serve.”
“A fair lass like you should be looking for a
husband of high station,” Bruchar said, and pulled her closer.
“I am wed. Now let me go!”
“Ach,” Bruchar answered, “are all the young
beautiful lassies taken? A kiss then, to make an old man feel young.”
She looked to Artaius in
desperation.
“He means no harm,” he answered. “Would such a
small favor be such a great price for your freedom?”
She leaned close to the grizzled
chieftain, closed her eyes, and wrinkled her nose. Her lips moved to Bruchar’s
cheek. He groped her breast. Beer splashed as she jerked away, slipped, and
fell to the floor.
Artaius jumped to his feet and
extended a hand. “Let me help you.”
Ignoring him, she stood up by
herself, brushing dust and beer from her skirts.
“You might have helped when I needed
it.”
She stood tall, slender as a willow,
and tossed her long blond hair behind broad shoulders with a haughty jerk of
the head.
Artaius studied her fine features
and pale blue eyes. “Are you Germani?” he asked.
“You will have to ask my mother. Now let me go
so I can finish and join my husband.”
Artaius persisted. “At least, give
me your name. When I tell the story, you will get proper credit for soaking
Bruchar, High Chieftain of the Brigantes, with beer. Truly, he meant no harm.
You must understand. Bruchar is lonely. He has but six wives.”
She smirked, shook her head, and
answered, “I am Lughin, daughter of Dubglas and wife of Osbert, Clan Coel.”
Artaius caught her pale eyes within
his own while pronouncing her name slowly, “Loo-een.” Named for a god, a bit pretentious,
is it not?”
Lughin shrugged. “It is what my
father called me. I was born during Lughnasa. She beamed. “I am the light in
his life.”
Artaius could not help returning a smile. He
noticed the faint yellow remnant of a bruise on her cheek and another mark near
her wrist. “And this Osbert, your husband, what could he have done to win the
heart of the fairest flower in Lugdunum?”
“He is tall and strong and fearless
beyond words.”
“And is he kind?” Artaius asked.
Lughin’s eyes widened but her brows narrowed.
“He is kind and treats me fairly.”
She turned and rushed away into the
haze and the crowd.
~*~
Drums pounded and people rushed to
clear a path through the center of the crowd. Druids dressed in deerskins with
antlers fixed on their heads opened the large oak doors at the far end of the
hall. Artaius closed his eyes, relishing the gush of cool air as the doors
opened.
The ancient druid, Mogh, led the
procession through the doors, hunched over, grasping his twisted oak staff for
balance. After a few steps, he paused, to catch his breath. Two druid brothers
moved forward to his side, ready to render aid. Mogh resumed his journey, down
the aisle towards the high chair of the ard-ri. A procession of hooded druids
followed, clad in plaid robes, woven of many colors.
As the
wizened magus approached his dark eyes were lost in shadows cast by bushy
brows and the swags of flesh beneath them. A long mustache and wispy beard
dangled below his chin, woven with bright colored ribbons and beads. Silky
white hair framed his face and flowed over his shoulders. He did not raise his
head as he approached Artaius or Bruchar, but they stood up and bowed
reverently before, Mogh, Grand Maighstor of Celtica and Albion.
At the end of the procession, six druid brothers entered the hall, carrying the ard-ri, lying on a large oval shield. They held
him high, on their shoulders.
Bruchar nudged Artaius. “At last,
Cingetorix arrives. We will dine shortly.”
Cingetorix posed like a fallen
warrior, on his back with his arms folded across his chest. His whitewashed
face and blackened his eyes, nose, and mouth gave him a skull-like appearance.
Nestled under his arm, a bronze helmet gleamed. The bearers lowered the shield
and Cingetorix on the floor before Mogh, who was chanting an invocation to
Lugh, the great father. He stepped forward and the crowd hushed waiting for him
to speak.
“Another year has past.” His voice
was as gnarled as his oaken staff. “Our harvest has been plentiful and our
tribe has prospered. It is time for our elders to pass judgment on Cingetorix, Ard-Ri of the Ambarri. An attendendant retrieved the gleaming helmet from
Cingetorix’s side and handed it to Grand Maighstor, Mogh.
Mogh spoke, “Council, cast your lots
in the helmet of Cingetorix, a white token for his rebirth or black token for
his death.”
The council emerged from the crowd,
elder men of distinction, displaying their status with silver torques gracing
their necks and lavish plaid sagus capes about their shoulders.
Each stone rang loudly as each man
passed by Mogh and dropped his token into the helm. Seven times the hollow ring
echoed through the great hall. When they finished, Mogh moved the helmet close to his chest, reached in, and counted the tokens with his claw-like fingers.
He handed the helmet back to the attendant, slammed his staff on the floor
seven times, and proclaimed, “Seven white stones are cast. Cingetorix rules for
another year and a day!”
The crowd cheered and Mogh passed
his staff over the prone body before him. Cingetorix came to life, sitting up
slowly and then rising to his feet. His tribesmen roared approval. Mogh’s shaky
hand offered Cingetorix a potion. The ard-ri grabbed the beverage and drained
the cup, pouring much of the contents down his chest. He handed the mug back to
Mogh, bowed to the Grand Maighstor, and faced his people.
“I am Cingetorix, Ard-Ri of the
Ambarri, born again and ordained to lead the tribe, by the Light of Lugh, for a
year and a day.”
Mogh stepped forward, raised his staff,
and prayed. He spoke with deep gravel-laced tones.
“Blessed
be Lugh, your guiding hand
For
bright sun that warms our land
For
green forests filled with game
For
ripe harvests o’er golden plain
For
salmon swimming in river’s roar
For
black iron from fiery forge
Guide
us gently with your light
Blessed
Lugh, renew our life”
Cingetorix stepped forward, bowed
before Mogh, and addressed the crowd.
“Tomorrow, at first light, Mogh will
sacrifice our finest bull to honor the Great Father. Then we shall drink and
feast on the meat until there is no more.”
The tribesmen stomped their feet and
cheered, musicians pounded drums, and sounded pipes with approval.
Cingetorix stood before his people
with his painted face and gleaming mail shirt while a druid placed a golden
band on his head. His wife, Esme, rose from her chair, bowed deeply, and threw
her arms around him, kissing him passionately, disregarding the pitch and white
wash smearing her face.
Bruchar nudged Artaius. “Would they
really kill him, if the elders voted against him?”
Artaius, answered, “If crops fail,
or if he was weak in battle, the ard-ri would be sacrificed to Lugh.”
Bruchar grunted and nodded approval.
Cingetorix turned to Artaius and
Bruchar. Artaius stood, bowed, and flexed on his knee deeply, but Bruchar stood
rigidly and only nodded his head in respect. Cingetorix accepted the attempt at
courtesy and extended his hand to Bruchar.
Bruchar clasped Cingetorix’s hand
with both of his. “Brigantes pledge loyalty and allegiance to the Ambarri for a
year and a day.”
Esme handed them each a cup of
strong mead. They drained the liquor and extended their cups for refills.
Cingetorix turned to the crowd
raising his cup and stood motionless until he had the hall’s attention.
“Tonight, we are honored with the chieftain of our faithful allies, the
Brigantes. He is accompanied with his most revered warrior, Artaius the Bear,
the chosen one of Camulos, slayer of Ualu, scourge of the Teutoni, and now protector
of the Brigante.”
Artaius looked to Bruchar. After
receiving a nod, he stepped forward, unsheathed his sword, and extended it high
above his head. Silence ensued as the Ambarri tribesmen perceived the soft aura
glowing around the blade, Clach na Adair, in the dim light.
“People of Lugdunum,” Artaius spoke,
“I pledge this sword, forged by my father’s hand, to protect the Ambarri as it
does the Brigante. It is a sword forged from heaven’s fiery gift and earthly
iron. As these elements were hammered together to form one strong blade,
Ambarri and Brigante will be joined in friendship and trade.”
Artaius sheathed his sword.
Cingetorix came forward, wrapped his arms around Artaius, and kissed him on
both cheeks.
“Fill your mugs,” he roared. “We
drink to our brothers, the Brigante.”
“Our friends and allies, the
Brigante,” the crowd repeated.
After finishing the toast, Artaius
returned to his seat next to Cingetorix. Pipes and drums resumed. Tribesmen
began to congregate around the hearth in anticipation feast.
When everyone seemed in the proper
place, Cingetorix stood once more.
“Let the feast begin by honoring the
foremost warrior, with the first cut of meat.”
Artaius did not answer or rise.
Silence encompassed the hall. Heads turned and fixed on him. Cingetorix turned
to the warrior. Artaius felt Bruchar’s sharp elbow in his side.
“Artaius, the Ambarri wait for you
to take the first portion.”
Artaius exhaled with dismay. “Can
they not start without me?”
“You are the pre-eminent warrior, of
both the Ambarri and Brigante. They honor you with the privilege. Now you must
show respect. By the Light of Lugh, will we ever eat?”
Artaius rested his cup on the bench,
and headed toward the large pig roasting on the spit. The crowd separated when
he approached, forming an aisle to the hearth. The savory aroma of the roasting
pig awakened his appetite.
“Perhaps being first in line is not such a bad
thing after all,” he called over his shoulder to Bruchar.
“We will suffer through it
together,” Bruchar, answered.
When his attention returned to the
hearth, a dark figure, framed in firelight, blocked his path. Artaius looked up
into squinty eyes, glaring angrily down on him. Firelight rimmed the ominous
dark face and his wispy red hair glowed like roasting embers.
The dark menace challenged, “Why
should Artaius, who is not Ambarri, be honored with the choicest cut of meat?”
Artaius stepped back. Even Cingetorix
froze in his chair. The hall was silent and static.
Artaius sucked in a deep breath.
“You are right. I am unworthy and do not deserve the honor. Tonight, in honor
of Lugh and the people of Lugdunum, I bequeath the honor to bravest Ambarri
warrior, who must be standing before me. Only the bravest warrior would dare
challenge Artaius the Bear. Son, take the choicest cut and call your family to
share it.”
The man’s biceps bulged under his
linen shirt that stretched tightly over his massive chest. He smiled
smugly to his cronies, a group of drunken youths, laughing and encouraging
their brash companion.
The challenger returned his
attention to Artaius. “You bequeath the honor to me? I thank Lugh for small
favors, but I need none from you.”
“Son--accept the honor.”
The upstart whipped a dagger from his
belt. “Honor is won with blood!” he yelled, and slashed wildly.
Artaius looked down at the streak of
red soaking through his rent shirt. The wound was a scratch, but it bleed
profusely. He felt the skin on his forehead tighten, and a pulse pound inside his head.
“Son, please …”
“Is the great Artaius the Bear losing his courage?”
The youth unsheathed his sword. With
the dagger in one hand and the sword in the other, he pointed both weapons at
Artaius’ heart.
The voice was distant to Artaius.
His attention focused on the tightness of his own lips, stretching into a
wretched sneer and the pressure of his eyes bulging from their sockets. He
raised a hand to the throbbing vein on his neck and gave his young antagonist
one last look of dismay.
Artaius fingered the shallow
wound across his chest. Glistening with crimson, he drew his hand to his
lips and sucked away the blood.
“Is it blood you want?” he rasped.
The upstart’s eyes widened and his mouth gaped. He stepped back -- too late.
The upstart’s eyes widened and his mouth gaped. He stepped back -- too late.
“Blood you shall have!” Artaius ripped his sword from its scabbard. Light flashed off the blade and the youth’s sword
flew out of his hand. Cleft in two pieces, it clinked and clanked across the stone
floor.
The second stroke sliced deeply into
the youth’s side and the dagger dropped.
The third stroke slammed down into
the soft mop of glowing red curls.
Blood and brains splattered onto
Artaius’ face and rained down on the crowd. He raised his arm to strike again.
Bruchar restrained him.
Regaining awareness, Artaius’ eyes
fixed on Lughin standing at the edge of the crowd. Splattered with blood, she
buried her face in her hands.
~*~
Artaius found himself on the bench
next to Cingetorix’s chair. The music had resumed, but nobody was dancing. An
unsettling ambience of anxious voices and commotion surrounded him.
“He is possessed by a demon!”
Cingetorix exclaimed.
“Not possessed,” Bruchar, answered, “It was a
fit of temper, a warrior’s trance, nothing more.”
“He did not have to murder the boy,”
Cingetorix retorted.
“The ferret attacked without
provocation. Any man would have taken him down, including me. He had no
choice,” Bruchar said.
“No choice? He disarmed the lad with
his first stroke. There was no need for murder.”
Cingetorix fell back into his chair,
dragging his fingers through his hair.
“He was a foster son from the Senones tribe
and under my protection. The blood of high chieftains was spilled. Even if we
pay compensation, his family will never let it go.”
Bruchar raised his hands in disgust.
“The fight was fair. If they want revenge, send them up the mountain to fight
Brigantes. We will settle any grievance they may wish to press.”
Artaius felt the soft arm of his
wife, Alicia, wrap around his neck. She offered him a potion. The warmth of her
bosom and familiar scent of lilies soothed him. Maureen, his other wife stood
plain and tall, beside them.
“I need drink,” he said. “Fetch me a
large mug.”
Maureen headed to the vat of beer
across the hall. Gathering his senses, Artaius leaned towards Cingetorix.
“Ard-ri, I am sorry this trouble. I
meant not to hurt the lad—too many battles and too many duels—the blood-lust
comes too quickly.”
“What has happened to you?” Cingetorix’s eyes
pierced deeply into Artaius. “Never have I seen rage encompass a man so
completely. Where is the boy that I played with as a youth; the timid cousin,
who would rather hammer iron than fight?”
Artaius dragged his hand across his mustache
and shook his head slowly, then his brows nitted, and his hand moved to the pommel
of his sword. “I am what I am. I have been blessed by Camulos with the
warrior’s trance.”
“Of course,” Cingetorix said pulling back
nervously. “The boy cast his own fate. I meant no offense. Accept my apology
for the trouble the upstart caused. It is just that it is going to be awkward
because he was of such high rank and noble birth. The Coel clan is ruthless and
vengeful. I doubt that we will be able to reason with them. They will not rest
until your head or mine hangs from a saddle.
A man pushed his way through the
crowd and bellowed, “I will not return a single coin of the bride price. It is
not my fault that fool challenged Artaius the Bear.”
“Dubglas, be reasonable,” Cingetorix answered.
“Consider we are dealing with Clan Coel.”
“I do not care. It is a matter of honor.
I am your client and call on you to protect me.”
“Dubglas?” Artaius repeated the name to
himself. “And would you be the father of Lughin.”
“You know my daughter?”
“She served me tonight. That is
all.”
The image of the blood-splattered
women with her face in her hands filled Artaius’ mind. “And this Osbert was her husband?”
“Aye, he was. And I am not paying a
single coin for a dead husband. They were only wed a few days.”
Maureen returned with a mug of
beer and handed it to Artaius. He pulled her close and whispered in her ear.
“Was I a monster?”
She pressed her lips tightly. "Close
enough".
Artaius gently stroked her
pox-scarred cheek with the back of his hand.
He drank
thirstily, and handed the mug back to Maureen, indicating he needed another.
“Two mugs this time,” Bruchar chimed.
Mogh approached the ard-ri’s chair. His
deep-set eyes came to life.
“Grand Maighstor Mogh,” Cingetorix asked,
“what am I to do? The boy challenged Artaius.”
“Cingetorix,” he said, “be at ease;
the fight was fair. I will attest to it.”
~*~
The rain stung Artaius’ face, not
the gentle spring rain that refreshes, but the icy, penetrating rain that bodes
of a long winter. He pulled his hood forward over his face and turned to
Bruchar mounted on the horse next to him. Bruchar’s shaggy bearskins were
soaked, matted, and shiny. They looked more like sealskins. Bruchar pulled
up the bear's head hood that topped his cloak. Fangs and nostrils framed his
face. Their wives were settled and snug in the enclosure of the wooden wagon
beside them.
“We
cannot leave,” Artaius said. “I keep thinking about Lughin.”
Bruchar retorted, “It was not your
fault. Her rabid husband got what he deserved. You merely defended
yourself.”
“I lost control and killed the
boy needlessly and made Lughin a widow.
“Camulos blessed you with the
warriors trance and you resent it. No good will come of this remorse.”
Footsteps splashed behind them.
Lughin approached them from across the yard.
“Artaius,” she called out, “Artaius, I must
talk to you.”
Artaius jumped down from his horse
to meet her. Strands of limp hair streaked across her face, framed with a woolen shawl. She extended
her hands. Artaius took them into his own hands and held them firmly. They felt
cold.
Artaius spoke,“Lughin, I am so
sorr….”
“Say nothing, it was not your fault.
Osbert was rash and abusive. He beat me over the most trifling things. I could
not leave him, because father spent the bride price to pay debts. We had no way
to repay it. When I heard you would be here for Lughnasa, I told Osbert many
times that he was not man enough for me and no match for the likes of Artaius
the Bear.”
Lughin’s eyes welled with tears. Her
arms wrapped around Artaius and cinched up tightly. “I had no choice; punish me
if you must.”
Artaius looked into the innocent
eyes. The urge to embrace her was overwhelming, but
he stiffened and pried her arms away and burst out laughing.
“Bruchar,” he called out, “she
thinks she put Osbert up to it—goaded him into challenging me.”
“No,” Bruchar called back. “Taranis
strike me down. I do not believe it.” Bruchar’s deep roar of laughter resonated
above the rain.
“Stop it, stop it!” Lughin screamed.
“If I did not do something, he would have tormented me for my entire life.”
Artaius abruptly stopped laughing
and he put his hands on her shoulders. Lughin broke down. Tears streamed from
her reddened eyes; her lips quivered.
“I never thought you would kill him!”
she exclaimed.
Artaius embraced her tightly.
“Men like Osbert need no excuse
start a fight. It is sad Lughdunum lost a brave warrior, but it is the way of
the world.”
“Artaius felt a spasm of grief quake
from within her and tears flowed again.
Artaius released his embrace and
remounted his horse.
“It’s done. Live with it.”
Bruchar clicked his tongue and the wagon start moving.
“I am glad he is dead.” The venomous words
softly hissed from her lips. Artaius turned sharply, not sure he heard them correctly.
Lughin walked away, a ghostly shape fading into into the fog and rain.
The End
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2 comments:
Good reading! A historical era so foreign to most it seems more like fantasy, but an intriguing story line that ties the past to present issues.
Thank you. The line between fantasy and fiction can be very narrow. I don't allow animals to talk. 😀
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